Online shopping is increasing significantly. What effects might this have on the environment and the types of jobs that are required?
In recent years, it is irrefutable that online shopping has become more popular than ever. This trend may have positive impacts on the environment and employment types in the short run, however, its drawbacks may overcome its benefits in the long run. This essay will explain the negative effects of online shopping on the environment and employment patterns.
Firstly, online shopping increases environmental damages due to the large number of fossils that are burned to deliver online orders within and across countries. As a result, Gas such as Green House gas is emitted into the atmosphere. To illustrate, in the case of a large company like Amazon, orders are driven or flown across countries to their centers to be available for next day deliveries. Consequently, these deliveries to the final consumers require further burning of fossils. The net impact on the environment is self-evidently massive which fastens environmental damage. Secondly, excess packaging as required by online shopping contributes majorly to environmental damages. For instance, a recent research conducted by Walmart shows that, on an average, the e-commerce channel produces more textile waste per item due to multiple deliveries.
On the other hand, regarding the effects of online shopping on the types of job required, more employment opportunities like online shopper assistants, delivery drivers and website designers are steadily on the rise. Superstores owners are constantly losing sales and business to the growing popularity of online stores thereby creating thousands of unemployment. Therefore, looking into the future, we see a situation in which the number of unemployed superstore owners will exceed the number of job openings that are created by the rapid development of online shops, hence a higher level of unemployment.
In conclusion, although, there are short term benefits of online shopping like convenience and ease, the negative effects might overshadow these benefits in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55048859935 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95610098522 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7919887201 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319788383871 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094790672878 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791392450886 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172366330313 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527619154826 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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