Some people prefer to provide help to those in the local community. Others, however prefer give money to national and international organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People differ in their opinion regarding how they want to help society. While some people prefer to provide aid to the underprivileged in their surrounding community, others prefer to donate to NGOs and charity organizations. This essay will discuss both views and conclude.
To begin with, when people provide support to the needy in their local communities, they establish a direct relationship with them. Hence, there are no mediators or opportunities for corruption and the impact of the support is felt by the giver. After all, their resources come from local people and as such, when the resources are utilized to help locals, it is fully justified. Recent interviews with donors to local communities reveal that they are much more satisfied with removing all intermediaries like the NGOs to ensure that all the monetary benefits get to the poor and their problems are resolved. For instance, if you are a doctor, you can help by providing medical aids to the destitute or if you are a teacher, you can offer your support by volunteering to teach in underdeveloped countries.
Conversely, if you have a lot to offer in charity, then donating to NGOs is a must. This is because they are flushed with larger platforms that are equipped with proper channels to distribute aids through global networks that reach a lot of people. More importantly, they have numerous branches in different parts of the countries which enable them to offer assistance to people in remote areas. As a donor, you become part of a global village. An example of an NGO providing support is the Red Cross which provided aids to the migrants during the Covid pandemic. Another example is UNICEF aimed at helping needy children.
To conclude, helping the needy directly or donating to charity organizations are both excellent ways of contributing to society. In my opinion, if there are people who need assistance in our local communities, we should help them first before contributing to NGOs. After all, charity begins at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t. This is because they are flushed with larger platforms that are equipped with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, hence, if, regarding, so, then, while, after all, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05988023952 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84320810623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1257258506 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195850753761 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625610280586 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587942067287 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136940084317 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915549591365 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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