Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people believe that only government actions can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree?
Over the last half-century, there has been a rapid growth in the number of people relocating to urban areas and this has resulted to scarcity of accommodations. While some people opine that the only way to solve this global problem is through government intervention, I am strongly inclined to agree with them.
To begin with, the main reason for housing problems in city centers is overpopulation as a result of high influx of job seekers looking for greener pastures. Therefore, if offices are made to relocate from the urban areas to the outskirts, more and more people will have no other option but to migrate to rural areas. Now, this can only be achieved through government intervention. The typical process is that the government will delineate an undeveloped or poorly planned area outside the city centers and construct new houses and offices alongside gardens, parks, and social amenities. Once these projects are completed, they can house thousands of residents affordably, which allows occupants to find quality jobs easily and move out from the cities.
Nonetheless, even though the influx of people into the city areas are under control, houses need to be built for residents who already live and work in the cities. Again, only the government can stop large real estates or profit-making construction firms from building large houses that could replace smaller ones and escalate the already existing housing crises. For example, in Abuja city, ambitious developers knock down government projects to build luxury homes and brownstone buildings that occupy large area mass and lead to poor area planning. These efforts can only be halted by the government.
To conclude, the government is the major catalyst in all housing solutions and they need to prioritize their efforts before these cities become gentrified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25850340136 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72289055971 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3964022069 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.833333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253606190286 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958821510052 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609701491172 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146440522975 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434352172045 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.