Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Undoubtedly, communication and networking has improved with the advent of computers. Some people believe that constantly using the computers can affect your children in positive ways, however, I am strongly inclined to disagree as it can cause more harm than good to young ones. I shall justify my opinion with the following arguments.
To begin with, computers like the personal laptops and tablets make working remotely possible. Hence, most parents who are workers occasionally take their unfinished work tasks home using their laptops. As a result, home time which is supposed to be considered kids time is affected. In other words, parental responsibilities like spending the weekends and evenings with young ones to assist with assignments and chat with them are hardly executed. It is paramount to note that these parental roles are deemed necessary for bond building with kids.
A recent study published in Nigeria about the impact of computers in homes concludes that approximately 95% of Nigerian parents own personal computers, out of which, 75% are workers who sometimes work from home to achieve certain deadlines. Consequently, children indirectly suffer from lack of attention from their parents.
Furthermore, computers that are fully connected to the internet are usually addictive and distracting. So many people testify to getting carried away with social media like Instagram and Facebook that they forget to prepare lunch or dinner for the kids and as a result, end up ordering restaurant foods and snacks for the children. This is not healthy for kids and can be avoided by controlling how often they are logged on to social media with their personal computers and the internet.
To conclude, while we enjoy the benefits of using personal computers for networking and communication, it is vital to draw our attention to it’s drawbacks and how disastrous it can be for children. Parents need to ensure that they do not get distracted from their parental responsibilities wwhile using the Computers.
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Did you mean 'to its drawbacks'?
Suggestion: to its drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31677018634 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8801262998 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593167701863 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5801692783 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.133333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142429557716 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454791527764 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540013734237 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878380857463 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479654394119 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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