One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
Long life and goo health I important and valuable for every person. Long life and good health today depends on good wealth. There are advantages and disadvantages in this topic which I will consider now.
There 3 main drawbacks in improving health care. Firstly, the good surgeons are always expensive, for individuals. The old age persons spend their saving moneys for children’s education and good life. Further more, there always have not good medical services in patients habitat city, and it also need extra money. Today in world has many species of illness, some of them are treated in certain cities. After all, some elderly have heart related diseases, that it causes problems during operation. Some medical operations dangerous for patients that have specific illness.
On the other side there are many benefits of improved medical care. First of all, good medical care can increase the life time. It helps personals to continue their work or hobbies and living with their lovely family. Secondly, we need for more experienced people in our social and industrial life. Today we have more young specialists in some directions, but they have not more experience for emergency. Finally, the government can also benefit from the elderly people. Their wisdom and practice can give more valuable and important advices to the government. These can improve our lives.
In conclusion while increasing of life time by medical care has many disadvantages and it depends on funds of saving. But advantages of this issues more profitable for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, after all, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18725099602 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55169874582 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6015624435 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.1 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.55 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183000384509 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624731489482 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637971864386 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133711031057 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602903874356 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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