the weather information is presented in the diagram
The diagram depicts about the weather information through computer.
Clearly, more and more information gained in variety of devices is collected in the computer center. In addition, people in different areas can receive information through different media.
Satellite photos analyse and forecast incoming information gained from satellite, while radar screens are gained from satellites and radars, and incoming information are transmitted to the synoptic chart through drifting buoys, radars and satellites. Additionally, if plenty of information are sent into the computer, the computer will be main source of information received.
There are information medias prepared for people as many as possible, broadcasting information into three types of devices: the television, radio and recorded announcement tools. The weather forecast can be received by people in the home, while the radio is designed for people in the rural area, and weather information are announced by recorded tools for people in the mall.
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| 2023-11-12 | Daniel3003 | 56 | view |
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| 2023-07-08 | roadtoapro | 61 | view |
- The diagram below show a main road in 2017 and the proposed changes to the road in 2018 73
- More and more people wanting to study overseas What is the cause What is the problem 67
- Causes of mortality in young people 78
- the diagram shows about the visual appearant motion 71
- Clothing and other things are made by famous brands have a reputable market since more people and people want to have these items Why is this Is this a positive or negative development 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81333333333 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92726645335 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7731201037 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298590999716 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15643543284 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106936180189 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211539873513 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115719739409 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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