In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The latest achievements and improvement in different fields have always been fascinating issue among people. The society is always talking about inventors and innovative persons. They spread their story that how they find the ideas or solving a problems. The above statement said without understanding of the latest contributions it is impossible to achieve an outstanding contribution. I mostly agree with this statement and I will explain my reasons.
First of all, it is necessary to learn essential skills and knowledge of a field and become fluent in different aspects of it and then one could find a way to make an outstanding creation. For instance, imagine a person who does not know how can play a gitur and does not know about basic knowledge of writing songs, he not only could not write an amazing song but also he could not event play a song. Therefore, without understanding the basic of the field is and being fluent to its knowledge, composing a song, in this example, and generally presenting a contribution would not be likely to happen.
Moreover, if one does not know about contribution of the field he would not be attantive to pursue the field to find a new contributions. For instance, Einstain had spent years in the library and university to learn from the others contributions befor presenting his contributions.When he became fluent to the latest knowledge, he provided his famous theory that are reliable until now. So, it is obvious in scientific field, doing literture review of the latest works is necessary.
On the other hand, some maintain that knowing a lot about a field and being fluent to its theory may limit researchers. They claim that there are some assumptions in each fields that confined the mind and a person from outside of this knowledge could challenge this assumption more severly. For instance, Mary Cory was an chemist but she could gave Noble prize because of her contributions in Physics. She was not completely fluent in Physics principles and challenged the assumptions that definde by physics’ scientists.
In conclusion, although most of the contributions happened when one had been fluent in that knowledge and aware of latest contribution, we can find some exceptions that one could challenge the assumptions of a field and provide a contributions or new inventions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a problem' or simply 'problems'?
Suggestion: a problem; problems
...that how they find the ideas or solving a problems. The above statement said without under...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'contribution'?
Suggestion: contribution
...ntive to pursue the field to find a new contributions. For instance, Einstain had spent years...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...ions befor presenting his contributions.When he became fluent to the latest knowledg...
^^^^
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...re severly. For instance, Mary Cory was an chemist but she could gave Noble prize ...
^^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
... Mary Cory was an chemist but she could gave Noble prize because of her contribution...
^^^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...been fluent in that knowledge and aware of latest contribution, we can find some exceptio...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a contribution' or simply 'contributions'?
Suggestion: a contribution; contributions
... the assumptions of a field and provide a contributions or new inventions.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05974025974 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02990102466 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1308144278 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166049857124 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608425116186 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479836090856 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963425898769 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306260194822 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a problem' or simply 'problems'?
Suggestion: a problem; problems
...that how they find the ideas or solving a problems. The above statement said without under...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'contribution'?
Suggestion: contribution
...ntive to pursue the field to find a new contributions. For instance, Einstain had spent years...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...ions befor presenting his contributions.When he became fluent to the latest knowledg...
^^^^
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...re severly. For instance, Mary Cory was an chemist but she could gave Noble prize ...
^^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
... Mary Cory was an chemist but she could gave Noble prize because of her contribution...
^^^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...been fluent in that knowledge and aware of latest contribution, we can find some exceptio...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a contribution' or simply 'contributions'?
Suggestion: a contribution; contributions
... the assumptions of a field and provide a contributions or new inventions.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05974025974 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02990102466 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1308144278 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166049857124 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608425116186 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479836090856 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963425898769 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306260194822 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.