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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Yuki Nguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...onfidence in me. As I am planning to return back to my family in an year, I would love t...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...planning to return back to my family in an year, I would love to travel around to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, i think, in addition, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34426229508 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55773169042 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581967213115 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8015455659 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5384615385 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252212835249 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708543523621 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827217425755 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131306281167 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700715582452 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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