Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
modern transportation and shipping has indeed made the world a better place to live, as I will further explain in the current essay.
Human societies saw the rising need of creating resources for subsistence and shelter. Once these conditions were successfully satisfied, trading became a key to development and a state of wellness. transportation makes both of the previous actions possible, by connecting different places and people around the world. Some centuries ago, people would starve and die of illnesses because of unknown medicines. However, with the arrival of trains, trucks, planes and other motorized vehicles, the share of products and knowledge was made exponentially easier. Nowadays we can even see multiple nations base their economies in services that depend exclusively in transportation, by the means of producing machinery, such as Germany, or enabling new routes of movement across the globe, such as Panama. The effects of these modern technologies of transportation can be seen in the drastic change of life expectancy in non-industrialized countries, their improvement in general quality of life and even in the so-called process of globalization.
In addition to the already mentioned points, cultural exchange has also been empowered by modern transportation. The amount of people travelling and moving through different continents has grown enormously, facilitating a better coexistence between different nations. Let's look at the european case; countries involved in reiterated wars are now an example of coöperation and free movement across borders. Faster and better ways of transportation have been necessary to the construction of a european identity.
In conclusion modern transportation has contributed greatly to the improvement of economies, quality of life, healthcare but has also been a fundamental part of cultural exchange and thus a more peaceful world. Although, it is convenient to start looking for more efficient solutions in this area, as climate change, which has been fueled by carbon emissions, is a big threat to the safety and maintenance of the progress made possible by modern transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Modern
modern transportation and shipping has indeed ...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Transportation
...to development and a state of wellness. transportation makes both of the previous actions poss...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... coexistence between different nations. Lets look at the european case; countries in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60856269113 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29119907045 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620795107034 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1372679879 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173175246714 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579748216828 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877419630064 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140974462015 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121974246903 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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