In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because thay will be able to read everything they want online without paying
In the future , everybody will not take printed newspapers or books this is why they will manage to know all things they wish online without money.
Now, a lot of people think that newspapers and books considerably gave more information about everything. However, some ones want to read online because of they do it , ones do not pay money . In result, newspapers and books moght fully disappear in the future.
In my view, i tatally disagree this point . Firstly, plenty of people like to read books . There are pupils , students and especially old people when old ones are bored , their hobby only read the book. On the other hand , newspapers have more quizes , logical questions and important articles about artists' life . It is the significant basic data , pupils must read the ones for entering the university and i do not love to know online them because of it is not comfortable for me . For example , i and my friends are studying more knowledge and learning plenty of datas from book 2 hours almost every day .
Why people read the book more than 2 hours all days ?
If you so this situation , your mind is improving. Newspapers and books are brought benefit however they are not brought harm to people. In additional, various people participate interesting competition maybe , they might have special prize for winner.
In conclusion, read more and more and never give up searching datas about ones . Scientists consider that it teach about life therefore my golden rule - read and understand in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89803921569 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58742651304 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5237596546 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272329309604 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817207239943 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883145632965 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149658868821 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112733193706 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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