The hours of sunshine per year, show table with lines, which are three major cities: London, New York, Sydney and including graphs describing monthly
In more detail, in January, sunshine in London and New York sun seems not as much, it is around 5 and 10 hours. Therefore in Sydney that number gous more than 25. Lines of London and New York cities are increased about 6 months. Despite, this period of time for line of Sydney going down. And other 5 months, New York with London changed ways and numbers with Sydney. During of the year London's line moves in the same way together with New York's. However line of Sydney is not been flexible with them all of the time.
And in the end of year, the hours of sunshine was calculated, between this cities. So the biggest number of hours of sunshine had achieved New York city, it was 2535 hours and going pick too,approximately 30 hours in July.
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... and including graphs describing monthly In more detail, in January, sunshine in ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...t as much, it is around 5 and 10 hours. Therefore in Sydney that number gous more than 25...
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Suggestion: period
...increased about 6 months. Despite, this period of time for line of Sydney going down. And oth...
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...months. Despite, this period of time for line of Sydney going down. And other 5 m...
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Suggestion: However,
...n the same way together with New Yorks. However line of Sydney is not been flexible wit...
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Suggestion: all the
...f Sydney is not been flexible with them all of the time. And in the end of year, the ho...
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Suggestion: these
...urs of sunshine was calculated, between this cities. So the biggest number of hours...
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Suggestion: , approximately
...ty, it was 2535 hours and going pick too,approximately 30 hours in July.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54938271605 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24502192791 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4597179514 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8888888889 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205480815413 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776387494008 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806865625194 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195801001758 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126583589811 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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