One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, life expectancy is increasing because people are more clear than in past, their attention for healthy as to much as never. Role of government is important too, improving the medician education can be proof for this and not only in education, this is may be showed in a lot of things and ways. And of course, it should be helpful to make a life longer, as it may. Qualities of people like this, we can take them like a reason of the consequences of improved medical care. Benefits are more and more, with improving this characters day by day, so all of this works for advantages.
About disadvantages, unfortunately we should give an attention for this side of statement too. I would like give reasons for negative side of this theme with my own experience and knowledge. Sometimes we can see the people, who are disabled and this problems with their bodies, often could prepare and make a border to be happy, not enough power and moral independence without any difference of chance. So much people like this around me and suddenly i have to see them every day in my life and i am so sad about this because this people always linked to someone to be saved and defenders can not be with them in all of situations. Doctors, medical persons sometimes are working out for help and support the people, who are disabled. The are incidents too with behavior of this type of people, not matter male or female and gender identity. Understand and be valuable at this period can be very difficult. We can not choose our body, it is not dependent us. So disadvantages like this can be reason for stopping and ban our aim and wishes.
And i had tried to summarize all of this statements and qualities and factors. My conclusion is that i agree with variant where people are happy and it close to the first statement, which is shows to us how we can be more clearly and avaliable to support someone and ourselves too.
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- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...sing because people are more clear than in past, their attention for healthy as to much...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...in past, their attention for healthy as to much as never. Role of government is im...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...eir attention for healthy as to much as never. Role of government is important too, i...
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Line 1, column 530, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'characters'' or 'character's'?
Suggestion: characters'; character's
... are more and more, with improving this characters day by day, so all of this works for ad...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...an see the people, who are disabled and this problems with their bodies, often could...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ce without any difference of chance. So much people like this around me and suddenly...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve to see them every day in my life and i am so sad about this because this peopl...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...life and i am so sad about this because this people always linked to someone to be s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'closes'?
Suggestion: closes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56231884058 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60307607283 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1236396885 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172152774945 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643350660193 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510582483737 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126111204215 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813650150422 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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