The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... and including graphs describing monthly In more detail, in January, sunshine in ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...t as much, it is around 5 and 10 hours. Therefore in Sydney that number gous more than 25...
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Suggestion: period
...increased about 6 months. Despite, this period of time for line of Sydney going down. And oth...
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Suggestion:
...months. Despite, this period of time for line of Sydney going down. And other 5 m...
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Suggestion: However,
...n the same way together with New Yorks. However line of Sydney is not been flexible wit...
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Suggestion: all the
...f Sydney is not been flexible with them all of the time. And in the end of year, the ho...
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Suggestion: these
...urs of sunshine was calculated, between this cities. So the biggest number of hours...
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Suggestion: , approximately
...ty, it was 2535 hours and going pick too,approximately 30 hours in July.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54938271605 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24502192791 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4597179514 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8888888889 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205480815413 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776387494008 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806865625194 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195801001758 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126583589811 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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