People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The differences between people across the globe are smaller than before. In my opinion, while I agree that people are more in common, for instance knowledge and hobbies, with comparison than before, they are still different in certain aspects.
To begin with, the knowledge which people gain from academic institutions is approximately the same regardless which country they study at. Take elementary school for example, the syllabus which primary school teach are mostly alike across the world, for instance mathematics, sciences and geography, which meant to ensure every student obtain same knowledge to avoid conflicts and contradictions in their future career. In contrast with before, people in different countries would learn different subjects like religious studies and alchemy which depend on what cultural zone they held, hence I believe people are more common in this aspect.
However, although the gap between everyone seems becomes smaller, people around the world are still vary in several perspective. Firstly, the culture of every ethnic group can be totally different, each different races contain their own unique habits and customs which suit the variation between each ethic groups. For instance the Japan is well known as the most friendliest country in the world, the reason behind this is that their parents always educate their children never be a troublemaker but to be polite, which establish a remarkable culture throughout the world. Secondly, languages across the world are highly diverse, the language spoken and written by each individual group could be drastically different, for instance Chinese and English, have almost nothing in common with each other.
In conclusion, although some of the properties among people are closer with comparison to then, most of the features are still significantly distinguishable, therefore I believe people across the world are still distinct and diverse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun perspective seems to be countable; consider using: 'several perspectives'.
Suggestion: several perspectives
...ople around the world are still vary in several perspective. Firstly, the culture of every ethnic g...
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Message: Use only 'friendliest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: friendliest
...instance the Japan is well known as the most friendliest country in the world, the reason behind...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the friendliest'.
Suggestion: most the friendliest
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... each other. In conclusion, although some of the properties among people are closer with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54054054054 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66355944946 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3266663043 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.0 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.3 7.06120827912 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238201820024 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109116457139 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767591001501 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164534568355 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797012620127 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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