Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages?
In the last few decades, we have witnessed the rapid advancements of medical care and procedures to treat a variety of ailments. Due to the advent of modern medicine, people are able to live longer. living longer is only meaningful if one retains their health, otherwise, they could be a burden on their family and have disadvantages to everyone. if you walk into a hospital in my country, the majority of the people are old and people who cannot fend for themselves.
These medical advancements are aiding old people to live longer and deal with their ailments at a greater cost. Unless people stay healthy and fit, they would be a burden on others. they would have to be taken care of and they most likely would stay at care centers. Their children will be working and would not have time to take care of them. so they send their parents to old age homes which might have a negative impact on the parents’ mindset.
In contrast, not all old people become ill. they would have good health and an active lifestyle. they can pursue things that they could not do when they were young. they can travel, join a class, or pick up a hobby. they wouldn’t have the same vigor and health in their sixties and seventies as they had in their youth. But pursuing things they like can be a good thing for them and can keep them happy. they can also look after their grandchildren if their children are working.
The pandemic has proved to us that medical care is very essential and isolation is the only method to ensure that it doesn't spread to other people. This can also have a negative impact on people. Hence, I believe having good health and keeping oneself fit is the best way to live so that they don’t face problems when they grow older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55379746835 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28575447717 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4417258895 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7368421053 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26315789474 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105919838606 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396872722749 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244018172814 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759567985735 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147482539281 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.