Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Giving some assistance to underdeveloped nations is a good way assumed by some people as a form of concern for those in need. However, this statement brings a controversial tactic which appears to have number of contradictory effects for more negative than positive. Personally, I disagree with this statement for some reasons which will be elaborated in this essay
Perhaps, one major reason for this why it leads some positivity and benefits for developing and developed country is that providing foreign aid could create a stronger relationship for all the parties involved in the transaction. Since the multi-international connection has already bonded, it could establish peaceful atmosphere. Taking Western Association contributed to give annual economy aid to Kenya every year, the local people response by giving twenty of cows to US as a gesture of solidarity and positive memory. Moreover, international aid could offer particular sector improvement in economically developing nations. When advanced economies nations have organized sophisticated technology to share the method in the field of agriculture, the poor nations could be given ways to produce high quality crops and staples. For example, Japanese fertilizer has been developed to cultivate faster and more rice.
I do appreciate if some people have different perspective from me, saying that giving hand to poor nations could cause negativities. Firstly, this aid creates dependencies when it could not be able to be correctly managed, for instance, local societies would be less active to work hard due to relying on helps. Secondly, aid is sometimes offered as a political tool by certain parties in realizing their political goals. Specifically, it is used to increase a certain country image to get more followers and it is not a form of tangible manifestation and sincerity.
In summary, providing helps may bring several pros and cons, however, I once again reaffirm that assisting poor nations is worth implementing because it provides several advantages for both nations in building international relation and enhancing good improvement in specific sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48484848485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14022453035 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0583864701 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181319123278 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617740162984 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531041938001 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100866901073 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651124902299 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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