You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport Write a letter to the airline In your letter describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight explain how missing your flight affected you make it clear what you would like the airline to do

Essay topics:

You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter,

describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight
explain how missing your flight affected you
make it clear what you would like the airline to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding a request for refund of my airline ticket which I missed flight last week due to some airport security check issued

I book my flight ticket with your airlines on 13th January from Surat to Delhi and I reached the airport one hour before my flight. Unfortunately, Your employer at check-in-desk give me a wrong boarding card. That was too late when I noticed the issue and result was I missed the flight and I could not be there at right time.

I was on my way to return my office, but I was unable to reach Delhi to attend my first office overseas conference. Can you imagine how embarrassing it even this is my first job in Delhi.

I would like to request you a full refund of my airline ticket for the inconvenience caused to me. I expect this to be resolved within the next five business days.

I am sincerely looking your response very fast.

Your Faithfully,

Mayur Doriwala

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Surat to Delhi and I reached the airport one hour before my flight. Unfortunately...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...used to me. I expect this to be resolved within the next five business days. I...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... within the next five business days. I am sincerely looking your response very...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, may, regarding, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56395348837 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54416771177 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0874123045 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269584963055 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925850939838 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07677903598 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132384274937 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722497586617 0.0580467560999 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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