People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Drugs has popularised in this modern socierties. However, there is an surplus in using both legal and illegal drugs among the youth, so their parents and other members of society is blamed as the bad example for this situation. This writing will analyse some causes and effects leading to the widespread of using drugs in today's youth and give recommendations to eradicate this abuse.
To start with, the drug adoption in youth is primarily due to parents and social circle. Parents or their surroundings might consume drugs to remain active at work or to relieve their mental stresses. A divorced mother, for example, comsumes drugs to comfort her frighten of the past and that set a bad example for her children. Moreover, this would lead to unhealthy lifestyle that children do nothing but opt to do the same.
On the another hand, media plays a vital role in the usage drugs in the young generation. They have to put up with academic institudes and pressure that parents and the society put on them and both legal and illegal drugs somehow assist them to suffer from all of those. In addition, it's a fact that young people do not select the true and right information from the media to consume. For instance, a losing weight drug is commonly advertised in the media, the youth do not even carefully research its ingredients but consume it without recognising the adverse impact in the long run.
In conclusion, the only possible way to hinder this problem is through enlightning the drug awareness. Government should put in their efforts to educate young people abouy the harsh effect of drug addiction. Indeed, young people would have a crystal view toward the drugs, create the healthy life and keep them safe from social appelling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...is modern socierties. However, there is an surplus in using both legal and illegal...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... suffer from all of those. In addition, its a fact that young people do not select ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88552188552 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51251106561 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4722126897 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329798833604 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104148088758 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943139352649 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187516383699 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10398643655 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.