Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Developed countries have given a helping hand in terms of financial aspects to poorer countries for thousands years. It is said that those financial aid does not improve the poverty in poor countries and they states that developed countries should assist in other types of help such as health care, education, technology, et cetera. From my perspective, this topic should be examined in various aspects.
On the one hand, Helping with the financial aid is one of the fastest way of helping. In the other words, those poor countries could use the aids from developed countries to tackle the problem that is prioritized at the time. In the turbulent flood occured last October in Central of Vietnam, for instance, had isolated and threaten hundreds of people from the safety. The Vietnamese authorities received the financial aid from the United States and rushed to those areas in order to give the immediate rescue and food such as instant noodles, rice, banh mi and essentials for local people daily basis.
On the other hand, poor education, poor health care or the low technology are elements that hinder the poor countries from development because these are factors that improve people's living standard. In some highland areas in the North of Vietnam, as an example, people are worried if they have something to satisfy their stomach or not, so how they could think about letting their children to go to school when they could not even feed them. Besides, the undeveloped technology in these areas is like a wall isolating them with the more modern technology. This is the time that the help from developed countries is needed to enhance their living conditions.
To recapitulate, financial aid from rich countries is like a immediate solution for the current issues but the assist in other types of help such as technology or education can tackle the problems in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
... the poverty in poor countries and they states that developed countries should assist ...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nancial aid from rich countries is like a immediate solution for the current issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96518987342 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55823653848 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6038370947 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331868152643 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130216181955 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11178123839 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221734521968 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947527782442 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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