You have received a letter from your university of Albion demanding a reason for your absence
from an exam. You were ill that day, but failed to submit the evidence. Write a letter to the
Examinations Committee explaining your situation. You should include:
– Apologies for the situation
– Identification for yourself (Name, Student Number, Case Number)
– An explanation of what had happened and any possible evidence you may have
– Possible resolutions to consider.
Dear sir,
I am writing to apologize on the absence of my mid term computer exam. I could not attend this because of my poor health condition as I was suffering from severe diarrhea. my I.D number is AA1793, Mehvish Munir, case number SX217.
I have eaten unhygienic food in dinner before the day of my exam. Unfortunately, it causes severe diarrhea in midnight while I was busy in the preparation of exam. However, I took medication, but it did not cure. I had sunken eyes, pale complexion and low blood pressure. I rushed to the hospital with my brother and admitted promptly. The A&E doctor had injected me medication with intravenous injection. I was in hospital the whole night, so I could not attend my exam on 26th Dec.
I admitted for a night and then discharged next day. my consultant prescribed me follow up medicine and advised me to well hydrate myself. The hospital admin has given me a medical certificate so that I can present it as an evidence to you. I hope that you will consider my application and my medical certificate.
As I could not attend my computer exam, I want to retake it. it is my humble request to consider me in the retake candidates so that I will appear in the exam to fulfill my compensation.
Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59555555556 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80801674224 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4216138884 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.625 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110572178463 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417772328585 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491052464785 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592567206339 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299293471259 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.