Dear MS or Sir,
I am writing in response to your letter regarding my unauthorized absence in the exam session held on sixth July. I would first like to apologize for failing to notify the university about my absence.
I am Elham Mousavi with students’ number 22202 who is studying in the final semester of biology. Unfortunately, I could not attend the Microbiology exam in the certain time because I suffered poisonous.
As a matter of fact, the night before the exam, not only me but some other students in the dormitory suffered stomachache and diarrhea as the dinner was deteriorated. We were admitted and hospitalized for three days in a clinic. For this occur, I was unable to make contact to the university and explain my condition. However, I enclosed my medical certificate to confirm my claim.
Because of this miserable situation, I would desperately request you either to permit me take my exam in another time or consider my average score taken during the course.
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Best regard
Elham Mousavi
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng you soon. Best regard Elham Mousavi
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92134831461 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86488211831 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5259439248 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6363636364 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160539230058 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544620597593 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498622510042 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730773847861 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060184371764 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng you soon. Best regard Elham Mousavi
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92134831461 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86488211831 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5259439248 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6363636364 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160539230058 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544620597593 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498622510042 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730773847861 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060184371764 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.