Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The people of the poor or underdeveloped countries are also capable of getting good jobs in rich countries, therefore, they should be allowed to get employments in foreign lands based on their skills and knowledge. I agree with this, however, there are some drawbacks to this context as well.
On the one hand, since the poor countries do not have sufficient opportunities to employ their citizens, rich countries should come to aid in this matter. In other words, poor nations are not capable of creating enough employment for their growing number of population in accordance with their capabilities, thus, developed nations around the world need to hire employees from these areas. To exemplify that, researches have shown that, around 30% of the Nigerian people who got jobs in foreign lands, became able to lead the standard lifestyle in the late '90s. Furthermore, these people who get jobs in the developed cities can send financial support to their families which enhances their lifestyles as well.
On the other hand, it can create a negative impact on the motherlands of the employees who are working in other countries around the world as they settle there. Hence, one can come back to their country after obtaining training from abroad to help their home country by improving it with their knowledge they have earned while living overseas. In addition, they can also create a scope of employment for their unemployed population to help them grow. For instance, at present, most of the students are getting higher education from abroad universities and coming back to help their deprived population. Moreover, the government should also take the necessary steps to create more standard job opportunities for its people.
To conclude, although the rich oversea countries should permit international citizens to work, it is the duty of the government to ensure sufficient qualified employments for its own people according to the skills and training they have to help them prosper in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17484662577 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71938527402 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5327278941 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.583333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222760071159 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863277108113 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439392239525 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14410317338 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013842098604 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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