Dear Praveen,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it’s such a short time since we last saw each other, it feels much longer.
Thank you so much for such a memorable dinner. I had a great feast and it was so delicious and tasty, especially the mutton Biryani and the beet-root salad which your sister prepared for us.
I was delighted to meet your family members, they are cordial, humble soft-spoken. I had a good conversation with your uncle about the cultural heritage of your native city. You’re lucky to have such a nice extended family.
Sorry, it has taken me so long to write back and thank you.
Next month, we’ll be celebrating our Wedding Anniversary and we’d be delighted if you could come over along with your family to celebrate it with us. It’ll be a chance for you to meet the rest of the family and see a bit of Hyderabad. Of course, you must stay with us. There’s plenty of room and we’ll pick you up at the railway station. I really hope you can make it.
Take care and write back soon.
Warm wishes,
Ravi
- You had dinner with your friend s family Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner In your letter you should Say what you enjoyed about the dinner Describe how you feel about his her family Invite your friend 73
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school Others however believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both views and give your own opinion
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work You phoned the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned 78
- In the modern world the image photograph or film is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that no one should do the same job forever while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual company and society Discuss both views and give your opinion 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., they are cordial, humble soft-spoken. I had a good conversation with your uncle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30806834543 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9815160525 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.25 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1875 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370969003663 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106677772793 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623523515648 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156735828083 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849560311334 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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