In conjunction with the development of technology, telecommuting has been becoming an effective and outstanding way of working. In parallel with the massive benefits, working this way still has some drawbacks that are needed to be noticed.
Teleworking has many different and excellent advantages. To begin with, the more comfortable the employees feel, the more qualified labor productivity is, especially designers or architects who need a suitable place for creativity as well as intense concentration. Besides, distance-working by technology devices means that the companies can economize the payment for renting offices or charging a range of equipment. Furthermore, if employees work from home, they can spend more time with their family or their personal life.
On the other hand, working by telecommuting also has some restrictions. Employers may find it difficult to manage the work for staff or organize a staff meeting because of distances. Therefore, social communication in the working environment will be moderated gradually. This condition not only disintegrates the working system but also damages the connection between employers and employees or between the workers.
Generally, teleworking can promote productivity, nevertheless, there are some disadvantages such as staff management or labor interaction will hinder the working process. Employers and the staff force should find some way to take the advantage of teleworking as well as improve the limitations
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- The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2000 and 2010 and by level of education for the year 2002 and 2010 73
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...needed to be noticed. Teleworking has many different and excellent advantages. To begin with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31179647137 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3948394669 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333371773831 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112755336029 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613248249866 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185007066543 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482196259989 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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