Imagine you are going to an English-speaking country; write to a rental agency, -
1. the type of house you want. –
2. its size. 3. the surroundings.
Dear sir or madam,
I am Manish from Punjab, India. I am writing this letter because I am going to visit your country next month. I want to rent a 2 bedroom apartment, preferably on the ground floor, for 2 years.
Let me explain what exactly I need. I want the bedrooms to be pretty spacious. All the rooms should have windows that would open outside, and the kitchen must have amenities like, dishwasher , microwave, refrigerator and it would be amazing if it would have a balcony too. My budget is between 1000$ and 1200$.
The apartment must be within walking distance from the shopping mall. Also it should have a park nearby as I have children. Therefore, I have to take him out everyday. Lastly, as i would be travelling by public transport, the area must have reliable transportation service.
Would you kindly let me know when you find anything matches with my requirement. If you have any query, Feel free to contact me on my mobile number 4157627248
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Kinds Regards,
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I am Manish from Punjab, India. I am w...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...going to visit your country next month. I want to rent a 2 bedroom apartment, pre...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...oor, for 2 years. Let me explain what exactly I need. I want the bedrooms to b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... it must have amenities like, dishwasher , microwave, refrigerator and it would be...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...ave a balcony too. My budget is between 1000$ and 1200$. The apartment must be w...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1200'.
Suggestion: $1200
...ony too. My budget is between 1000$ and 1200$. The apartment must be within walk...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...My budget is between 1000$ and 1200$. The apartment must be within walking dis...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...alking distance from the shopping mall. Also it should have a park nearby as I have ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...dren. Therefore, I have to take him out everyday. Lastly, as i would be travelling by pu...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve to take him out everyday. Lastly, as i would be travelling by public transport...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... by public transport, the area must have reliable transportation service. Wou...
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...any query, Feel free to contact me on my mobile number 4157627248 Thank you ...
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... free to contact me on my mobile number 4157627248 Thank you for your attent...
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...his matter. Kinds Regards, Manish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79444444444 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63356900876 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661111111111 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.642367064 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6428571429 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102928564036 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315643568126 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471343995592 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666419106701 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500256527811 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.