Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, an increasing number of women are choosing to join the police and army force. while some people believe that women ought to be allowed to work shoulder to shoulder with men in these fields, others are against this notion. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss both views.
we are heading towards an egalitarian society. Everybody has equal right to choose his desired profession. So, women also should have the same right as men to go in the field wherever they want to go. People should be chosen on the basis of their education, skills, character. So, if women have ability, interest, and suitable education, to be soldiers or police officers, they should be welcome. Gender should not come in the way of the selection process.
However, some people argue that, because women tend to weaker men, they should work under their physical consideration. But what they fail to see that, the women who opt for such fields, have to go through rigorous training and workout, which makes them suitable for these sectors. Even women may better at controlling the situation by communicating effectively. In the Police force, it has been shown by research that women are more likely to be effective in handling juvenile crime as compare to men. the police jobs require more than just physical strength. Teamwork, Leadership, and communication may be as equally indispensable.
To put it in a nutshell, I would say despite the physical limitation, which can be handled through proper training procedures, everyone should has the freedom to select for their favorable profession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09541984733 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72278690988 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9439587573 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284818581314 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846263875397 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472390511097 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165339755392 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834119041996 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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