one of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that
country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
describe why you want to work in that country
tell him/her about your skills and experience
ask some questions related to work (e.g. wage/salary)
Dear Pardeep,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to ask you to aid me in finding a job in your country UAE. I am really fascinated by the world class infrastructure and well-maintained roads and also I heard from my friends that employees over there get lucrative salaries and have latest technologies at the workplace, which stimulated my interest.
Let me explain about my working professional experience and education history. I have finished my Mechanical Engineering from Punjab technical university in 2017 and then Got hired in an Auto manufacturing company, where I was working as a design engineer. I have extensive knowledge about designing car parts and also I am lean six sigma certified.
I would greatly appreciate it if you can tell me about the number of agencies in your country, which would assist me in cracking interviews and also guide me about how to look for accommodation.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Pardeep, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e in finding a job in your country UAE. I am really fascinated by the world class...
^
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
...s over there get lucrative salaries and have latest technologies at the workplace, which st...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ab technical university in 2017 and then Got hired in an Auto manufacturing compa...
^^
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sigma' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sigmas'.
Suggestion: sigmas
...igning car parts and also I am lean six sigma certified. I would greatly appreciat...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... also I am lean six sigma certified. I would greatly appreciate it if you can ...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e about how to look for accommodation. Looking forward to hearing from you. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05847953216 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01701115022 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4505780716 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215850414307 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859028802024 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904509562396 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118088605935 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542041172057 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.