TPO 30: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.
according to some ancient historians, the greek defended themselves with a creative weapon called a "burning mirror when the roman navy attacked them.according to the passage, there are several reasons which shows that the burning mirror weapon is just a myth and presents few reaons. The speaker however, told that the claim about the weapon is true and stated that the points mentioned in the passage are not convincing.
First, according to the passage the greeks were not technologically advanced enough to made mirror in specific parabolic curvature to make it works. The speaker stated that, to make the device the greeks did not need single copper sheet but several pieces of copper sheets. these pieces can easily be arrange into parabolic cuvature shape. Therefore, to make the burning mirror the greeks did not need advanced technology.
second, as passage stated that the burning mirror required long time to set a ship on fire from the results shown by experiment. however, speaker stated that these experiments results are based on the ship made of wood but the actual roman ship was not only made of wood. it contain other materials like a sticky substance called pitch, which burns within seconds and spread to the wood even if the ship is moving. Consequently, the weapon is very effective and practical for the attcked on a moving ship.
Finally, passage compare the burning mirror with flaming arrow, as the flaming arrows are as effective as the burning mirror. The speaker stated otherwise. The flaming arrows can b eeasily seen by the romans when they were aimed. however, burning mirror cannot be seen as it is just appear as mirror when the sun rays fall on mirror it appears more surprising and more effective than arrow.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2023-08-31 | madinaaaaaaaaaa | 80 | view |
2023-08-30 | madinaaaaaaaaaa | 73 | view |
2023-03-13 | saharmnd | 80 | view |
2023-03-04 | saharmnd | 80 | view |
2022-10-12 | jjj33333 | 52 | view |
- Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs Which one of these opinions do you agree with Use spe 66
- The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work Of the following what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have a serious attitude about their work a lot 70
- Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighborhood Do you think this is a good idea Why or why not Explain your position using specific reasons and examples 66
- Some people prefer to live in a small town Others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live in Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 60
- Leaders like John F Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States Name another world leader you think is important Give specific reasons and examples for your choice 60
No. of Words: 293 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 293 250
No. of Characters: 1422 1200
No. of Different Words: 143 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.137 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.853 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.363 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.246 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.418 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.67 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4