Many teenagers have their own smartphones. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of this and give your own opinion.
Many adolescents have own smart devices. This essay argues that despite the main advantage of this being the ability to stay in contact with their parents, the main disadvantage is a lack of face-to-face communication, which has detrimental effects.
The biggest benefit of teenager having mobiles is the fact that their parents can call them even check on their location. This is because smartphones have GPS and many app allow parents to accurately determine where the child is. For example, messaging app like Viber have a location setting, so that the parents can ask where the child is in a message and then check on google maps when their loved ones respond. In my opinion, although this is useful when parents can keep tabs on their children, it prevents teenagers from learning vital social skills.
However, some believe that the drawback is that teens will spend too much time on their phones, and this reduce the amount of time they spend talking face to face. Face to face communication allow to children to develop their social skills and grow as human beings and they become anti social adults in the future if they are staring at a screen all day. For instance, it is very common to go to coffee shop in my local area and see large group of young people sitting around and not talking for several minutes because they are so engrossed in their smartphones. I agree that this will stunt their development and that usage of phone should be limited.
To conclude, the primary value of teenager having smartphones is the fact that they will be safer because their parents can locate them easily; however, I believe that the possible lack of social development is a major downside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: many apps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84931506849 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45466255684 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7516630594 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256967408727 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106317553972 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675119598274 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155735094966 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702815502504 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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