People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that we humans resemble each other in more ways than we know. Nowadays, these general opinions about the similarity and differences have varied interpretations. As far as my opinion is concerned, I do not concur with this viewpoint because human existence is unique in many ways than a few in common.
Firstly, genetic markers in the biological DNA play a critical role in creating an exclusive identity for each human being, for example, faces, body physiques, gender. Moreover, due to these features, they develop personality and traits even under similar socioeconomic circumstances and environmental conditions of the place where they mature. However, one can argue that people are the same because of race, caste and creed, but others could say that they will still be contradicting when asked to express their opinions on any issue.
Secondly, individual belief is an indicator for making people different from each other. Interestingly, these beliefs originate from self-realisation and practices learnt from religious books that describe their religion, whether god believers or atheists. Furthermore, it culminates into civilisation and cultures that are uncommon from one another. Apart from this, the population could be broadly divided into groups based on lifestyle and profession and labelled as similar. However, as individuals, they will set a remarkable example by their achievements and social status.
In conclusion, with the above representations, it is quite evident that humans exceedingly are more different from each other. Although they can be the same in colour, habits and attire, they can be distinct in making choices, decisions and fulfilment of purpose that defines their existence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54887218045 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02899288494 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654135338346 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4152578725 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162005080113 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564464426019 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376338067388 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990877982786 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335376607044 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.