Person should make an important decision alone.
Almost everyone agrees that life is full of difficult situations that make finding an adviser/a guidance is a must to ensure the most successful life. From my perspective, I completely disagree that a person takes a fateful decision by himself .instead, a person needs to consult others. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will develop in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, it's without a shadow of a doubt, person should ask an experienced people thus he gain a comprehensive vision about whatever he is confused about. In fact, I've experienced an episode in my life that relates to what I mean. After I graduated from high school, I had two options, being a pharmacist like my father or being an engineer like my uncle. I asked both of them about the merits and the flaws in each career. Eventually, I could make the right decision and join the pharmacy school after I got comprehensive information about each major. If I had not asked others about their opinions, I would not have made the right /appropriate/ choice.
Secondly, people sometimes take their decision according to their feeling/passion without any rationality thus they have to talk to others and seek for advice. My brother's experience is compelling evidence for what I mean. My brother, Sammy, had a great opportunity to travel abroad and complete his major as a computer engineer at Harvard University. He was so scared and felt that he would fail. Fortunately, He has a wise friend who supported and encouraged him to trust himself and never gave up. Because of my brother's friend, Sammy think thoughtfully and decided to accept the offer. If my brother had only followed his emotions, he would not have won this great opportunity.
It can be summed up in accentuating that people should ask others when they want to make a critical decision because others have the experience that can address the advantages and the drawbacks in each opinion. Also, others think rationally more than the person who is involved in the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...make finding an adviser/a guidance is a must to ensure the most successful life. From m...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rson takes a fateful decision by himself .instead, a person needs to consult other...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ubsequent paragraphs. First of all, its without a shadow of a doubt, person sho...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gains'.
Suggestion: gains
...hould ask an experienced people thus he gain a comprehensive vision about whatever h...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...whatever he is confused about. In fact, Ive experienced an episode in my life that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, i mean, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90670553936 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8420826382 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.727830446 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173679797067 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463638343356 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543749049821 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117692125952 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595597182146 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.