The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The internet has grown to be one of the most effective means for trip planning. however, it is often people argue that there is no point in traveling overseas when you can see and gain knowledge about other nations and countries, although I agree internet has many positive effects on traveling experience, I would argue about personal traveling
Nowadays, the Internet provides people a wide range of information about all countries across the world. With the aid of the internet, people can research about the countries they like to pay a visit and reach to any information they are looking for such as watching videos or reading people’s comments on Google which is a mega search engine, and Youtube, which is an online video sharing and Twitch, which is the streaming platform. Therefore, people do not need to travel across the world to gain knowledge about their culture and traditions.
Another example is the sites that could help people to experience what they have not had through their personal life: by exposing them to new places, a new societies, or even culture people can reform their views of the world and open their minds while using the internet . In other words, travelers should not get around to gain their best experience because not only can they find appropriate information about many historical places, and tourist attractions, but because of internet, they can have a virtual travelling to a place they like.
To sum up, since technology is improving day by day, people do not require to travel to other countries to learn about their culture and life styles and enjoy the historical places.
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: traveling; travelling
...oving day by day, people do not require to travel to other countries to learn about their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96703296703 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55158302818 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.749348277 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.714285714 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240137650271 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119088961182 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543781003994 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150931127332 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034146065863 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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