Group assignments are common in college and even in high school now. There is a widespread belief that working together can promote students to cooperate with their classmates. From my perspective, however, working alone will be more effective for several reasons.
In the first place, finishing assign projects independently can promote student's research skill. As we know, the first step of the assignment is to find related information for the topic. In the process of searching the files they need, they can acquire skills such as dealing with data. As a result, if students can finish all the assignments on their own, they can get access to more information and master their research skills by practising a lot. On the contrary, if a student is working in a group, some other students might take responsibility for gathering information. Thus, some students will never have a chance to put the theory of searching into practice. Therefore, working alone can be more beneficial in their research in the long run.
Furthermore, working alone can help students to get the whole picture of the assignment. One assignment contains several stages or parts requiring different skills to accomplish. If you try to figure it out independently, a reasonable connection between each part should be clear in the student's mind. It is helpful for students to form a style of logical thinking. For instance, to construct a mathematic model, students need to follow the assumption, build a model and test the model. Once working alone, students can learn the characteristics of each stage and so have a deeper understanding of mathematical models. However, when the assignment is allocated to each member, the connection may not be so strong because the logic is incoherent. Hence, working alone enables all stages of the assignment under their own
In conclusion, working alone will be more effective due to the improvement of research skills and logical thinking.
- TOEFL T P O 43 Integrated Writing Task 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17924528302 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96342063713 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5682681748 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287430697154 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920507384726 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045444760253 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178199168957 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316056607778 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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