The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
While online shopping has greatly impacted the sales of the physical store, it would be to wrong to assume that online shopping will completely diminish the retail shops. In my opinion, there will be an ample amount of market space will be left even after the succession of online shopping. This essay will elucidate the reasons why physical shops will thrive even after the burgeon of online shopping.
There are numerous reasons why individuals prefer physical retail shops over e-commerce shopping websites. The most conspicuous one is that most people choose the first-hand experience of the product which they want to buy. For an illustration, a survey conducted by the consumer forum of the USA reveals that the physical stores are the number one choice of the public for shopping clothes. Furthermore, delivery times of online shopping websites are huge, and some section of shoppers prefer to shop on the go, without having to wait for the product to arrive.
Most of the section of shoppers still trust physical store due to the lack of trust and security. There is a possibility that the product ordered over an online shopping platform either to have defected or incorrect. Because of this reason, most consumers purchase costly products through physical stores. Moreover, there is a huge risk of getting an online shopping account hacked or stolen. A report by the Internet Organisation of USA reveals that more than 1 billion accounts details were leaked in 2020.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that there is a rise in online shopping business, but still there is a lack of physical experience and trust. Due to this, I believe that the online shopping business will not have a dramatic impact on the sales of the shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y physical shops will thrive even after the burgeon of online shopping. There are numero...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, still, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04081632653 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58592895357 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8037800643 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252624109792 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998869146159 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668613861755 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16994273552 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472680639455 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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