Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The best education is often gained from a university concentrating in field areas that complete the mental building of the students. the sport along with social activities have a tremendous effects on the student's perform in the university as it is building a strong communication between the participants. Many people think that the good university is the one which focus on developing and enhancing department conducting to the books , classes , and the technical teaching methods. For me , I absolutely agree with university focusing on the sports and social activities and put an equal financial budget at that goes with the enhancing the libraries and classes because of the mental capability as well as the strong communication skill, the student obtains from these things.
First, the sports with all kinds improve greatly the mental and body ability of the student. as we all know, the good mind in the health body which has a strong relation with sport the person does. This indicates that the student playing any types of sports available in the university campus has the chance of getting a health body which in turn enhances his learning level. To illustrate, I have a friend of mine who was fat and had a difficulty reviewing the analytic problem since it requires a lot of patience solving it but he had a habit of sleeping a lot of time due to the heavy weight he has and the not much chances to join a sport club. therefore, had his university supported the sports , he would loss a lot of weight and enhancing it education level.
Second, the social activities improves the communications between the students in the university campus. Some student are not social and does not like to be in social media. This thing effects on the student capabilities in dealing with the real world which considered one of crucial skills in the success of any student careers. Thus, existence of such activities in the university enhance greatly communicative skills of the enrolled students.
To sum up , activities such as sports and social ones should be treated equally as that aimed to arises the academic things such as libraries and classes .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93922651934 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78203543687 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491712707182 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4885703835 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220827780984 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812876184171 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627986011191 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141232069555 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520735440417 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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