Is prevention better than cure?
Prevention is better than cure, which means it is better to take precautions before getting involved in an illness or a problem. Also should be mentioned study on a subject on treating diseases can cost astronomical amounts of money. This essay agrees with this statement and will discuss the benefits of the prevention.
First of all, It is indeed essential for human to elevate their knowledge and stay up to date to deal with diseases, Some people might discuss prevention can not be enough since the human body is valuable compare to any other living species, although prevention is indispensable and it is the primary line of defense for mankind, In other words, Many diseases still have no any medical treatment but it can be stoped by studying on prevention for Example, by educating people about the Covid-19 pandemic which can be prevented from spreading to others, governments were able to afford time for their scientists and researchers to find a suitable cure for this deadly virus.
However, many people still believe treatment benefits the economy, directly and indirectly, an increase in supply demands will organize the situation for the pharmaceutical companies to employ more people to have an increase in quantity even some countries revenues come from this industry just like Switzerland or Israel, which means they industry highly depends on the medical tourists but the issue is these treatments always costs a fortune.
In conclusion, medical research and treatments indeed are vital for human yet its costs a fortune to pay up for these treatments bills.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ng involved in an illness or a problem. Also should be mentioned study on a subject ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble compare to any other living species, although prevention is indispensable and...
^^
Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...n other words, Many diseases still have no any medical treatment but it can be sto...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, still, even so, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72637157721 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.079925216 49.4020404114 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.166666667 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.1666666667 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178275886015 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101743782665 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176854787349 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1034091775 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11776678837 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ng involved in an illness or a problem. Also should be mentioned study on a subject ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble compare to any other living species, although prevention is indispensable and...
^^
Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...n other words, Many diseases still have no any medical treatment but it can be sto...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, still, even so, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72637157721 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.079925216 49.4020404114 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.166666667 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.1666666667 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178275886015 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101743782665 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176854787349 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1034091775 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11776678837 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.