Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level However some say individuals should pay for their university education Discuss both views and give your opinion

Certainly, needless to say education is necessary for all people. Some people argue that government should provide free study not only for school studentbut alsoto university student. However,other say that university educators should pay fee themselves. Both side of view will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs
To commence with, University students have a tough study and then they always feel strees that is why they can not earn money after university lecture. So government should large amount of money spend on university study. Further, some people do not have money since they belong to poor class family thereby they can not pay their fee while they have good education skill and it can be possible with the help of government. Therefore, all people can do study without any money problem .as a result, government should take actions about it
On the other hand, some people say University student spend their fees by themselves because with this they will be bacome self dependent and they do not have to face any problem after university. It will beneficial not only for student but also to their parent and they can also learn how to earn meney with preparing study .in fact, they should depend on themselves.
To sum up, government should spend on the student who can not pay their fees because of any physical problem.but,other who can earn money they should pay their fee themselves

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, therefore, while, in fact, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90598290598 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48813386688 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482905982906 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 234.0 20.2975951904 1153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1148.0 106.682146367 1076% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 234.0 20.7667163134 1127% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 98.0 7.06120827912 1388% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293994400377 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.293994400377 0.084324248473 349% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223575415564 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136136055352 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 118.7 13.0946893788 906% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -157.57 50.2224549098 -314% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 93.4 11.3001002004 827% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.68 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.4 8.58950901804 203% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 95.6 10.1190380762 945% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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