Many problems of modern society cannot be solve by the laws and the legal system. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Contemporary society is a complex one. Far more convulating than it had been in the past, it has engendered many problems which put the effectiveness of the current law making procedures and legal system in question. Though they may not completely eradictate the problems, I opine that these systems do solve them to a significant extent, as shown in the following three examples.
First of all, those in power rely on the majority support of the people to stay in power. In order to receive this staunch support, they have to understand people’s problems and take an active part in solving them. For instance, gay marriage has been legalized in many countries of the West. This law has played a crucial role in empowering the LGBTQ community. This gave the community a voice to express their opinions and to fight for their rights so that they can help us in establishing a modern version of an egalitarian society. Thus laws are crucial in solving problems of the people.
In contrast, laws may also hurt people’s sentiments. It may go against what people want and further aggrandize their problems. A good example would be the passing of the farmer’s bill in India. The rationale behind it was to expose farmers to a an open market where higher profits were attainable. However this also exposed the farmers to greater risks, which they were unprepared for: leading to a several protests against this bill. This bill may have been passed for the collective good of the farmers, but if they themselves are so disaffected, one cannot help but wonder is the law actually solving the people’s problems?
While keeping the above example in mind, sometimes laws are imperative. They may not be able to change what is in peole’s minds, but they need to be imposed so that eventually people realise their importance. The most obvious example would be the measures of caution against covid. Though many people blatantly disregarded these measures, it was the an absolutely necessary measure. Consequently, the curfews, social distancing and masks etc led to bringing down the fatalities and recovery of millions all over the world. We were able to overcome this global pandemic precisely because these laws were in place despite the open defiance to them by people.
From the above examples, we can see that laws may not always be in line with society’s sentiments but do bring about social collective good. If they fail to serve this fundamental purpose, the people always keep these systems in check and facilitate a change that serves the betterment of society. Hence it is integral that we lend some faith to these laws and legal systems.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nale behind it was to expose farmers to a an open market where higher profits wer...
^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
...nale behind it was to expose farmers to a an open market where higher profits were a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'this bill'.
Suggestion: this bill
...r leading to a several protests against this bill This bill may have been passed for the collective...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...antly disregarded these measures it was the an absolutely necessary measure Consequent...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...isregarded these measures it was the an absolutely necessary measure Consequently the curfews social...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pite the open defiance to them by people From the above examples we can see that ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80536912752 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53033089903 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501118568233 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 447.0 23.0359550562 1940% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2148.0 118.986275619 1805% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 447.0 23.4991977007 1902% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 130.0 5.21951772744 2491% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361000499544 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.361000499544 0.0831039109588 434% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193337239983 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144929147336 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 224.7 14.1392134831 1589% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -373.77 48.8420337079 -765% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 176.4 12.1743820225 1449% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.23 8.38706741573 349% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.8971910112 504% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 180.8 11.2143820225 1612% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.7820224719 509% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nale behind it was to expose farmers to a an open market where higher profits wer...
^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
...nale behind it was to expose farmers to a an open market where higher profits were a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'this bill'.
Suggestion: this bill
...r leading to a several protests against this bill This bill may have been passed for the collective...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...antly disregarded these measures it was the an absolutely necessary measure Consequent...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...isregarded these measures it was the an absolutely necessary measure Consequently the curfews social...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pite the open defiance to them by people From the above examples we can see that ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80536912752 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53033089903 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501118568233 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 447.0 23.0359550562 1940% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2148.0 118.986275619 1805% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 447.0 23.4991977007 1902% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 130.0 5.21951772744 2491% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361000499544 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.361000499544 0.0831039109588 434% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193337239983 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144929147336 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 224.7 14.1392134831 1589% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -373.77 48.8420337079 -765% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 176.4 12.1743820225 1449% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.23 8.38706741573 349% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.8971910112 504% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 180.8 11.2143820225 1612% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.7820224719 509% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.