Dear Rohan,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness.
I know that I had not kept my promise on coming to your place last Friday evening. So, I am writing this letter to express my reason for not meeting you.
As you know, I came to your town for a business trip. My company organized my stay in Radisson Hotel since we had booked a conference room in the Radisson. I informed you that I'll be coming to meet you after finishing my work since we have made dinner reservations at club Skyhigh.
The reason for canceling the meetup plan because of my heavy work schedule. I had to prepare the final paperwork that needed to submit on the same day. So, I was unable to come as well as not informing you about my plans to reschedule our dinner plan. I know you have kept waited for me on the day since I received your letter after coming back to my home. I am extremely sorry for my actions, and I hope you will understand the situation I was dealing with in my work.
Besides, I'll be coming next month to finalize the new deal with my client to your city. This time I won't be disappointing you like that last mistake of not coming to meet you. I'm planning to make reservations at Club Sky high on the first week of Saturday next month.
I am hoping for you to join me on the same day.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter in the best of health and happiness I know that I had not kept my promise on...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...made dinner reservations at club Skyhigh The reason for canceling the meetup plan...
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Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... was dealing with in my work Besides Ill be coming next month to finalize the ne...
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Line 10, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... last mistake of not coming to meet you Im planning to make reservations at Club S...
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Line 10, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on the first week of Saturday next month I am hoping for you to join me on the sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16666666667 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27058021729 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496124031008 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 258.0 16.3608247423 1577% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1075.0 76.5299724578 1405% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 258.0 16.8248392259 1533% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 4.34317383033 1059% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275800814396 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.275800814396 0.0766984524023 360% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179430741402 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276938427196 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 127.2 8.37731958763 1518% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -165.01 70.7449484536 -233% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 100.4 7.45979381443 1346% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.39 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.51 7.59969072165 244% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.2 8.54432989691 1231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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