Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Science by its very definition is the exploration of unknown. The prompt argures that govenments should not fund research whose results are unclear. I mostly disagree with this for two reasons. however, I do concede that some research areas are more delicate than others.
To begin, governments should fund scientific researchs even if the results are unclear, because science by it's very nature is about the discovery of unknown. For instance, when bengamin franklin walked out on a stormy day to test his theory on electricity, he wasn't sure about the consequences. if he, in fear of 'unclear' consequences, didn't test his thoeries that day, our knowledge on electricity wouldn't have been as substantial as it is today. Likewise, when newton decided to stare at the sun for as long as he could to find out the effects of sun-rays on his eyes, he didn't have any previously written textbook to refer to about the consequences of his actions. science has been exploring the unknown for as long as the humans are there on this planet. And, by these unpredictable endevours, science has always solved problems and benefited humankind. if the govenments don't fund researchs because of the uncertainty of the results then, this would hamper the momentum of science.
Furthermore, governmets should fund unpredictable research projects, because these journey towards 'unclear' might be beneficial to mankind in the longrun. For example, if tomas alva edison, didn't go for the journey toward unclear, we wouldn't have the lightbulb today. furthermore, the discovery of penicilin, the wonder antibiotic, was acutally accidentally discovered by a scientist. Not only the light bulb and the penicilin, there are thousands of examples of greatest scientific discoveries that were acutally made as a result of unintentional experiments. And,the word 'unclear' itself doesn't necessarily mean the result has to be negative. The results of an unpredictable expriments can be positive as wel. The chances even, for an unpredictable expreiment to be fruitful or not at the end. but, it these unpredictable endevours are not taken, then the fear of going into uncertainty mighty be shrouded but the posibility of getting something beneficial for mankind is mutilated. however, there are some aspects of science where there is high chance that the results might be so catastrophic that might destroy mankind. government fundings in these fields should be regulated to make sure that humans, in search of knowledge and achievements, don't end up destroying themselves. For example, experiments with urenium, is seen with much skepticism around the world. because, even if , controlled experiments for solving global energy crisis is always good for mankind, any uncontrolled endevours might end up in great loss on human life. Catastrophy in fukuhima is a great example of this.
Lastly, I think, govenments should fund most researchs regardless of their unpredictability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, likewise, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3147751606 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03668189315 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533190578158 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3737545284 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.28 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.68 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155536113634 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465186823431 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043638200558 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107911532977 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239444736929 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.