More and more people using computers and electronic devices to asses information. Therefore there is no longer to print books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that, advent of technology has tremendous benefits in human being's life. In this day and age, computers and other electronic devices are used by individuals to access information. It is a highly debatable issue
among the mobs they think that, there is no need to publish newspapers, magazines and books in the future. I discord with the assigned assertion, this essay intends to discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to the motion, there are manifold reasons why I assert that traditional ways of getting information should be continued. First and foremost, there is still high number of civilians who are not familiar with the use of modern gadgets. To elaborate it, majority of masses are uneducated, and do not know how to search information on these electronic devices because of their high tech features; therefore, they tend to read information from newspapers and other outdated sources.Besides it, the another reason is that, as there are some remote areas where not only internet facility is not available but also wifi, so individuals use newspapers to read in order to stay updated about the incidents which are happening all over the globe. Hence, publishing the newspapers are worthwhile it's printing should not be restricted.
Further emphasizing on my views. Principally, even if browsing the information on computers is much more convenient, the problem of unemployment may arise due to no printing of books, newspapers. To demonstrate, if people will continue to get information with the help of ongoing gadgets rather than subscribing newspapers and magazines at their home, the publications centers will be shut down.Consequently, manager will lay down their workers and the situation of unemployment may come into existence due to this phenomenon. Furthermore,the another considerable point is to mention is that, the reading habits of children will demolish if newspapers will not be printed out. To be specific, unless the children do not read newspaper, one can not able to develop their reading skills as well as do not able to broaden their horizon of knowledge since newspapers and magazines are the great source of learning vocabulary words. Thus, publication of books, newspapers never be stopped.
To recapitulate, although majority of individuals using modern mediums such as computers, laptops to get the news about the incidents which are occurring in the world, the importance of newspapers can not be denied. Both mediums have their own significance, so printing of newspapers must be continued in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26150121065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01882187824 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561743341404 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.569615148 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.823529412 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208550095351 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598219797665 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501414766411 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10086895823 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340656450143 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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