You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inquire about some expensive purchases from my credit card statement which are not made by me. I am one of your clients for the past five years.

I have made the last transaction on 15th February at the Pizza station for 300 rupees. On the next day, I noticed that two transactions made a Crown plaza and Raddison hotel about the same time. I cannot be present at two different places at the same time and even it is not possible practically. I think might it happened due to some technical glitch in your application while generating the monthly statement.

I want to you resolve it as soon as possible. Although, I had experienced that same issue last year and it was not rectified even though I had notified your bank from my last complaint letter. Please provide your best phone number to contact you to tackle this problem. Also, I can provide proof of my bills. I request you to please resent me the credit card statement after resolving my issue as I am not going to pay until the issue gets resolved.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our clients for the past five years. I have made the last transaction on 15th ...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...le generating the monthly statement. I want to you resolve it as soon as possi...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5116693743 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3455334939 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5384615385 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279807831227 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869338232748 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762737079463 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163373185228 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744492540533 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.