The maps below show the town of Tennyson in 1990 and the present day.
The maps illustrate the town of Tennyson in 1990 and all the development it has gone through till present day.
Overall, the town used to be a residential area with lots of houses, whereas now it has turned into a commercial area with lots of apartments and a factory.
The town has a river running through the middle of it which divides it into western and eastern part. The eastern part used to contain many houses, an apartment building and a big pond. While the pond is still there, all the rest has been replaced by numerous big multistory residential buildings, a super market and a railway line running eastwards.
The eastern part has seen similar drastic changes, as there has been a new airport built near the school. The hospital remains in place but now it’s surrounded by a few more houses. A new factory has been added, replacing the houses and trees, in the southern part of the town, which is near the third new rail-bridge that has been added to the river on top of the two previous ones. The far-east corner of the town still contains the railway station and the tracks but now a new track joins it from the west as well. Lastly a new ferry station has been developed in the south-eastern part of the town to facilitate the transportation.
- The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened kilometers or route and passenger numbers per year in millions 73
- The line graph provides information about the number of customers that 4 restaurants had between the years of 1990 and 2015 73
- The bar charts show how many local and international students were enrolled in the Bachelor of Science and Bachelor of Law courses at the Bond University between 2010 and 2012 73
- The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade This has made overseas travel much more accessible Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 84
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, so, still, third, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59911894273 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53992933932 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528634361233 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9514546398 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148075106335 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679033415498 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129382393533 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140997004815 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178714489689 0.0819641961636 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.