In many developing countries, there is a problem with the declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
Where industrialization is responsible for bringing prosperity to the developing nations, it’s also leading to a rise in pollution. This is affecting both land and air in those countries. This essay will discuss some of the causes as well as present some steps that could be taken to tackle this problem.
Construction of new factories can have a significant environmental impact due to two main reasons. First of all, developing nations don’t have stricter laws regarding pollution which is exploited by the owners of these companies. In an effort to maximize their profits, they dispose of the hazardous waste into the oceans or landfills without any processing. For instance, Dupont was in the news lately for dumping harmful chemicals in the river in Mexico that lead to a catastrophic impact on the marine life there. Secondly, citizens of developing nations often aren’t fully aware of the effect that their habits have on the climate. There isn’t enough recycling or limitations on use of harmful herbicides, which obviously exacerbates this problem. Nations like Bolivia were using chlorofluorocarbons until recently as pesticides, which was banned a decade ago by the UN.
There are some measures that could be taken to off set the above mentioned environmental damage. Firstly, introduction and implementation of new laws regarding climate change similar to those that are in effect in the developed countries. These should address the damage being done by pollution to land, air and water bodies. If done correctly, this can be very helpful. Take the example of China, once it had the worst air quality in the world, but now it’s leading UN in the fight against climate change. Secondly, there should be a massive drive to educate people about the impact that their daily routine has on the environment. They should be encouraged to buy enough for their needs and drive only if necessary, as excessive consumerism is the root of most of our problems today. A recent survey by Galop showed that cities where people drove less had better air quality.
In conclusion, although industrialization is important, it should be done responsibly. In my view, developing countries should adapt stricter laws and educate their people, if they want to help improve their environment.
- The maps below show the town of Tennyson in 1990 and the present day 72
- The diagram below shows the carbon cycle 61
- The maps below show the city of Stokeford in 1930 and development plans for 2030 67
- More cars and traffic on the road This causes traffic jams and excessive pollution People suggest that one way to solve this issue is to increase the price of fuel 84
- The charts below show total British exports and the countries that Britain exports to 52
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hose countries. This essay will discuss some of the causes as well as present some steps th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96352574986 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574123989218 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2223801221 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231663115948 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064484259138 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513630921284 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142155856806 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740155294521 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hose countries. This essay will discuss some of the causes as well as present some steps th...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96352574986 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574123989218 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2223801221 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231663115948 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064484259138 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513630921284 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142155856806 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740155294521 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.