The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The rendered diagrams depict the information regarding the process of how cement is formed by several steps and tools, another is how concrete made for building purpose from cement.
Describing, the cement production. Initially, powder has been formed by using limestone and Clay and then it is transferred into mixture. By moving further, the power is supplied to Rotating heater which is rotated in clockwise direction and Heat is gave from outside to rotating heater. Nextly, grinder is used to grind the Powder and formed it into cement then cement has been a poured into the back bags.
Analyzing, the concrete production used for building. Firstly, concrete is formed by adding 10% of water and 15% cement. By following these, 25% sand and 50% gravel is mixed up with water and cement then it is filled into concrete mixer which is rotated in clockwise direction. Besides, 50% of gravel is used as small stones.
Overall, it is an acyclic process and complex process and also it has 8 steps to make cement, while concrete is formed by cement, water, sand, gravel and concrete mixer.
- The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- There are some motive for people to work Some people think money is the most important Do you agree or disagree 78
- There are some motives for people to work Some people think money is the most important do you agree or disagree 73
- Below graph show comparison of age structure in India and France in 1984 84
- The below graph compare the age structure of India and France in 1984 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Initially, powder has been formed by using limestone and Clay and then it is ...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...ated in clockwise direction and Heat is gave from outside to rotating heater. Nextly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96739130435 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46743918743 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1211089675 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296972481644 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125085139716 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837322597909 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200932115358 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695657557316 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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