The weather change is inevitable part on the plante Earth. Whenever, the weather condition happened changed at that time big prejudice on the business level. However, other people believe that it is gives new opportunity for business. So, I give prons and cons in the upcoming paragraph.
Intially, each coin has two sides in the same way I expalin one side that how climate change will negatively effect on the Global world. To begin with, when the rainy season will be start after the summer season at a time some construction works can be stop and many workers become an unemployment. Such as, some vendors cannot stand up on the road. Besides, many hotels cannot be better earn due to some people do not go outside the house. The strong example, rainy days is bad impact on the transportation work because government can be close some roads and do not reach the destination some trucks time to time.
Another site, weather condition can be give new chances for ladies new business. Many people do seasonal business. For instance, in the summer season some customers want to buy an air conditioner, fans, an air‐cooler and so on. Afterwards, in the winter time some children become a victim of a fever, so at that a time medical people can be increasing your business. So, I believe each one can be laid new business in the rotation condition.
In conclude, I can say that the issue of Climate Change give chance for survive on the earth and people can be make a plan according to the business.
- School should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers Subjects such as music and sports are not useful To what extend do you agree or disagree 77
- The chart below shows the percentage of young people at a University in 2000 and 2001 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compare where relevant 70
- The pictures below show the differences in the layout of a conference Centre between its present and its future plan summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- In many countries people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could Why do you think this is What can be done to change this 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so, for instance, such as, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71590909091 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57635632524 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8830969031 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200372701521 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693542665055 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442868822593 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128654092061 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297524677457 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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