SOME THINK THAT CLIMATE CHANGE REFORMS WILL NEGATIVELY AFFECT BUSINESS. OTHERS FEEL THEY ARE AN OPPORTUNITY FOR BUSINESSES.
DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
The weather changes always happen on this planet earth, each country has different weathers over the year. Some people think it will impact the current business but some people think it’s a new opportunity to start a new business. In my opinion changes in weather, the pattern creates new business opportunities Thus, both viewpoints are discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, climate changes from summer to either winter or rainy will impact the usage of cotton clothes. People will stop using those and start buying woolen clothes such as sweaters and jackets to protect them from coldness. Same way more rain will impact the construction business as they were unable to continue their real estate business as the rain is a blocker for them to complete the building or house construction. Defiantly the people who do the small business will always impact because of this example like coconut selling shops, soda or cool drinks shops will don’t have a great business in w inter or rainy season than summer.
On the other hand, climate changes will increase the business for the business people who sell things accordingly and doing some small changes in the appliances. For example, the hot weather places always on demand for fans and air coolers. The medicine business people always get benefited based on the season they rotate the medicines for the common diseases which occurs in that season. Even coming to the food business always on demand they will change the menu accordingly.
In conclusion, there are some potential problems because of changes in weather patterns but all human beings need to fight for survival. Therefore people need to change the business plans accordingly to get enough profits and to survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...uman beings need to fight for survival. Therefore people need to change the business plan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06944444444 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39932314272 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1450042911 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342994707837 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129263107021 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791636993024 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208199282418 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593249075634 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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