Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to take part in your charity event which is coming next week.
My parents taught me to help the people, especially the orphans and elders who do not have sources of income to live a good quality of life. So, when I started earning money from my job, I try to help people by donating some money or providing some food and vegetables to charitable communities. Helping needed ones always gives me satisfaction because I was living for a good cause.
I organized many NGO events which had been supervised under my vision. They were related to debate, art, and sports competitions which I have been taking care of the past few years. I have enough experienced to host this event.
Since I working as a planner and I have been running different social events, so I can calculate the actual cost that would be required to host this event. Also, I have a big network that can distribute pamphlets around the neighborhood. In this way, we will have the maximum audience from the town to see and contribute to the charitable event.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to take part in your charity event which i...
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...xperienced to host this event. Since I working as a planner and I have been ru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74146341463 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57321581281 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673170731707 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0072042124 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156466605644 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515826388336 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347225503805 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798322859561 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331974341303 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.