A recent study indicates that children living in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal have lower levels of tooth decay than children living in suburban areas in the United States, despite the fact that people in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal receive little to no professional dental care, while people in suburban areas in the United States see a dentist an average of 1.25 times per year. Thus, regular dental care is not helpful in preventing tooth decay
The argument provided for discussion states that regular dental care is not helpful in preventing tooth decay. This argument is based on the explanation that children living in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal have lower levels of tooth decay despite receiving little to no professional dental care as compared to the children living in the United States suburban area, who visit their dentists quite frequently.
Regional variations also affect bodily functions. The difference in the climate, temperatures, terrains, food items available, eating and cooking styles, medical practices etc. may affect why more children experience tooth decay in one area as compared to another. Comparing the children in Himalayan mountains of Nepal vs suburban areas of the United States may not be accurate. The study considers that regular dental care, as suggested by a dentist is the only factor that helps in preventing tooth decay, which is incorrect. It missed out on the fact that a child would have to see a dentist to prevent a tooth decay only when there are some factors contributing to tooth decay.
One of the key factors to be considered is the eating habits of a child. Tooth decay is caused due to consumption of certain types of food such as sugar on an ongoing basis. It could be a possibility that children in the suburban areas of Unites States consume sugary foods such chocolates, candies, doughnuts etc. frequently from a very young age. The mountain region of Nepal has inaccessible terrains and hence the children there might end up consuming less of artificially sweetened food items and relying more on the fruits and vegetables available locally. How the food is cooked will also make a difference to how it will affect your teeth.
Another factor to be considered is the dental hygiene practices of a child. Dental care need not include only visiting a dentist frequently, it will also include day to day habits followed by a family such as how frequently children brush their teeth, do they brush their teeth before going to bed, the kind of toothpastes they use etc., whether they floss their teeth or not and so on. In this case, it may be a possibility that the dental care practices of children living in the Himalayan region are more effective in preventing tooth decays as compared to the habits of kids living in the suburban areas of the United States.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 402 350
No. of Characters: 1947 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.478 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.843 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.593 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.575 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64643416165 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47263681592 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6714469496 57.8364921388 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.176470588 119.503703932 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.70786347227 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368123083732 0.218282227539 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116564281965 0.0743258471296 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14034675731 0.0701772020484 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253746564131 0.128457276422 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116267081764 0.0628817314937 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.3799401198 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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