International trade is more important than ever before, but the actual vehicles used to transport goods have not advanced much since the 1950s. The majority of goods that travel between countries are still transported on container ships. However, many companies are developing autonomous container ships that do not require a human crew to control them. Crewless cargo ships have three important advantages over crewed vessels.
Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.
Both the passage and the lecture discusses about the international trading and the ships used. While the passage says that crew less cargo ships can be a good option the lecture disagrees.
First, the passage claims that the crew less cargo ships would reduce the labor costs for shipping companies. However, the lecture insists that it is unlikely to have autonomous container ships and most of the ship already have only important and needed crew members like the one who inspect the ship or check if there is any broken equipment. So if they remove the crew the equipment will remain not repaired and it will be the companies loss.
Next, the passage asserts that crew less ships would be less attractive target for pirates as there will be no crew for the pirates to ransom. In contrast, the lecture argues that even if low tech pirates might not able to target the ships. But the high-tech pirates can track the ship through GPS and try to crash it or maybe they will hack into the system and try to control it and take the valuable goods from the ships.
Finally, the passage states that these ships would be less likely to have accidents with as there is no human to cause an error.On the other hand, the lecture points out that the accidents doesn't happen because of human error its because the ships take time to change their course or direction. And even if these ship are automated the ship, most of the ships are operated by humans. Hence there will not be only automated ship there might be human operated ship, so there are still chances of accidents.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... remain not repaired and it will be the companies loss. Next, the passage asserts that c...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun ships is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s. Next, the passage asserts that crew less ships would be less attractive target f...
^^^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... as there is no human to cause an error.On the other hand, the lecture points out ...
^^
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e lecture points out that the accidents doesnt happen because of human error its becau...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ts doesnt happen because of human error its because the ships take time to change t...
^^^
Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...st of the ships are operated by humans. Hence there will not be only automated ship t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, still, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60357142857 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12981447405 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6380897353 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.181818182 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122996211293 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575576108651 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353030317474 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863847085534 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298665945815 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... remain not repaired and it will be the companies loss. Next, the passage asserts that c...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun ships is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s. Next, the passage asserts that crew less ships would be less attractive target f...
^^^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... as there is no human to cause an error.On the other hand, the lecture points out ...
^^
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e lecture points out that the accidents doesnt happen because of human error its becau...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ts doesnt happen because of human error its because the ships take time to change t...
^^^
Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...st of the ships are operated by humans. Hence there will not be only automated ship t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, still, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60357142857 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12981447405 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489285714286 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6380897353 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.181818182 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122996211293 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575576108651 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353030317474 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863847085534 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298665945815 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.